I apparently got over my short, 1 week writer's block today, so I'll show you guys something I wrote during class. Please give some feedback. I wrote this in about 10 minutes.
To everybody listening, don't even worry bout me if I were to go missing/
Cuz none of my homies were down to listen/
They could not envision the mission that I've been give/
This shit they call life ain't about whippin and lickin/
It's about living your life and you're goal to make it right/
Turning to the left cuz you think it lookin bright/
Well it might if you're lucky but I'm lookin with my third eye/
So high, my point of view is lookin like its birds eye/
Shit changed for me when I got into my first fight/
Shit, career wise? That coulda been my first night/
Cuz I started coming up on my own shit/
Never goin dippin in my mommas morher****in purse, right/
I'm so flawless, lawless/
Told my homie Tyler you can call into the office/
Tell em I ain't comin back, tok me that was thoughtless/
Lookin like a mother****in profit with the wallet/
And I ain't even want the strap/
You can use it if you need it but I need it back/
If a hater cookin up, you can feed em that/
I'll just write a rap, when they come, I can read him that/
Prolly say thanks, atlas, I needed that/
This that raw shit, know a nigga fiending that/
Really needing rap, **** new shit, it ain't music/
Talking about killing it, you abusive/
Got all of this power and you don't know how to use it/
Walking like a god, mother****er you useless/
Can't even tell me what your mother****in use is/
You growin like a tree, but in reality you're fruitless/
Don't be a doofus, screwing with us, where the truth is/
I keep spittin like I'm toothless, not a nuisance, but I'm ruthless/
In this rap shit, got it lucid, fake friends, I call em judas/
Since I started coming up, sneak disses are what they usin/
Said I'm fake, they're just excuses, I've been real since i was human/
Now I'm rooted in this shit, the other teams can keep resuming/
My mind is too elusive, cuz I'm living in a state/
Where it feels like every day I'm getting bitten by a snake/
Hope I catch em with a blade, pray to god it ain't too late/
Shit, by now I'd rather roll a blunt up at the pearly gates/I know Peter is a saint, but bet he'd glare and walk away/
Said okay, I'm fine with fire, didn't bring a lighter anyway/
Again, I haven't perfected any of it, but still, just wanted to see what you guys think. The flow changes up here and there
To everybody listening, don't even worry bout me if I were to go missing/
Cuz none of my homies were down to listen/
They could not envision the mission that I've been give/
This shit they call life ain't about whippin and lickin/
It's about living your life and you're goal to make it right/
Turning to the left cuz you think it lookin bright/
Well it might if you're lucky but I'm lookin with my third eye/
So high, my point of view is lookin like its birds eye/
Shit changed for me when I got into my first fight/
Shit, career wise? That coulda been my first night/
Cuz I started coming up on my own shit/
Never goin dippin in my mommas morher****in purse, right/
I'm so flawless, lawless/
Told my homie Tyler you can call into the office/
Tell em I ain't comin back, tok me that was thoughtless/
Lookin like a mother****in profit with the wallet/
And I ain't even want the strap/
You can use it if you need it but I need it back/
If a hater cookin up, you can feed em that/
I'll just write a rap, when they come, I can read him that/
Prolly say thanks, atlas, I needed that/
This that raw shit, know a nigga fiending that/
Really needing rap, **** new shit, it ain't music/
Talking about killing it, you abusive/
Got all of this power and you don't know how to use it/
Walking like a god, mother****er you useless/
Can't even tell me what your mother****in use is/
You growin like a tree, but in reality you're fruitless/
Don't be a doofus, screwing with us, where the truth is/
I keep spittin like I'm toothless, not a nuisance, but I'm ruthless/
In this rap shit, got it lucid, fake friends, I call em judas/
Since I started coming up, sneak disses are what they usin/
Said I'm fake, they're just excuses, I've been real since i was human/
Now I'm rooted in this shit, the other teams can keep resuming/
My mind is too elusive, cuz I'm living in a state/
Where it feels like every day I'm getting bitten by a snake/
Hope I catch em with a blade, pray to god it ain't too late/
Shit, by now I'd rather roll a blunt up at the pearly gates/I know Peter is a saint, but bet he'd glare and walk away/
Said okay, I'm fine with fire, didn't bring a lighter anyway/
Again, I haven't perfected any of it, but still, just wanted to see what you guys think. The flow changes up here and there
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