I've been working on my writing a lot in the past few years. I've come from very basic, with a limited understanding of technicalities, to effortlessly applying many technicalities when I write. While I take it seriously, I write as a hobby, with no interest in becoming a "superstar" or anything like that. Just wanted an opinion on this 16:
I'm spinnin' a plot to penetrate your frontal cortex
more or less destroy your thoughts like a vortex
of course I'm flexin' ... you would, too
if you knew that you could spit like I.Q.
I'm a nuisance ... to synthetic emcess
I'll kick a b*tch rapper straight in his face, I'm Bruce Lee
I'm the master, craft attacks that will collapse you
lyrics are battle axes swingin' at your synapses
practice "rap kwon do", my flow is more dope
than George Jung hoppin' a plane smugglin' coke
approach me wrong, this song comes to life
I swing swords like a warrior - slice and dice
I cut deeply, subcutaneous
then I'll aviate a plane into your tower like the trade center
then blame Jenner for choppin' his d*ck off
and callin' himself Caitlyn for the reason I'm pissed off (blame the media)
I'm spinnin' a plot to penetrate your frontal cortex
more or less destroy your thoughts like a vortex
of course I'm flexin' ... you would, too
if you knew that you could spit like I.Q.
I'm a nuisance ... to synthetic emcess
I'll kick a b*tch rapper straight in his face, I'm Bruce Lee
I'm the master, craft attacks that will collapse you
lyrics are battle axes swingin' at your synapses
practice "rap kwon do", my flow is more dope
than George Jung hoppin' a plane smugglin' coke
approach me wrong, this song comes to life
I swing swords like a warrior - slice and dice
I cut deeply, subcutaneous
then I'll aviate a plane into your tower like the trade center
then blame Jenner for choppin' his d*ck off
and callin' himself Caitlyn for the reason I'm pissed off (blame the media)