Opinion?

[Crepitus]

Hey guys, I posted here before and got some great advice on how to improve and I made another song since and I'd like your opinion on this too!
I believe I have improved but lets see what you think.

 

[KaedenZero]

Nice beat choice. A classic.
You should put more tone and energy into your voice. It might sound funny at first but after a while you'll learn to naturally control it.