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Interesting thing.

Credit for
1) Actually recording something and making a video for it. Congrats for doing...something
2) Voice doesn't match the visual, but I dig the vocals
3) a]Switching up in the middle, didn't expect that.
b] Going from night to day when the music changed was good.
4) hip hop topics of sucka MCs...classic theme (no wannabe gangsta, drugs, woman-bashing etc...)
5) Doesn't seem like a copy, clone or parody of current US rap

Against
1) a] Some parts are unclear (audio clarity)
b] ...and I have no idea what you are talking about in some sections
c] sounds like some parts are just rhyming words to rhyme them, but I'm not sure- might be related to a cultural gap from Poland.
 
Thank you for the response! Nah dude! I don't rhyme words just to rhyme em haha! Each line is well thought out. If you specified a line I could describe what I meant!
Appreciate the response greatly dude!
 
Well, you could always share the lyrics and then explain what inspired your writing.

It's not a bad idea to list the lyrics in the about/description area of the video on youtube.

I still like to listen and read along at the same time.
 
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