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To Q-tip's "Renaissance Rap"
Kinda went off on a tangent with it but I like to think its what gives it a personality of its own :cool:

spittin
incredible melody
heavenly hittin this
steadily heavily
sedated with wit
im faded and
i brought it
cause you waited for it
not generic
and my crew
remains the same
esoteric
numeric flow
like surround sound
i be spheric
the cleric
with these scriptures
knowledge from the verse
nature
spot failure
like the natural cause
and laws of physics
i got it
so get out
or get with it
its what ive been about
ever since a bean sprout
f*ck afraid scream shout
stuck in cage let me out
to the universal pulse
astrology
follows me
to three key vaults man-
efestation
of the mind
for mankind
to unwind
undergoing mutation
wether physically
or mentally
a change of vibration
the perfection of man
the potential he can
and ever since it began
ive helped out with the clan
cause every moment is unique
and unrepeatable
since your rhyme style is weak
and im unbeatable
who the challenger
of the galactic calendar
from a standard notation
activation of genes
with the means
of conciseness
as it seems
and it leans
so we all can
reminisce
and dont fear
the hall of mirrors
drop the spear
and think clearer
its near the year
so go straight don't veer
cause were on the right path
hope you're in the aftermath
take a bubble bath in wrath
if your out for cash
forget the facts
its what you feel
but just keep it real
1999 was the deal
 
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