mockingbird needs a reveiw

conzcept

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these are verses that i wrote fir the mockingbird bet by emineim i was told before that i needed 2 pick a new beat because the beats irelevant now but i beleive thats not true but anyway heres the verses

now i know that we have been broken up now for quite awhile
but i still reminisce about the days you made me smile
you made everyday the best and i thank you for that
but the memories in my mind just rewind and play it back and its a fact that theirs no more US because their is no more TRUST
no more LUCK no more LOVE all because i fell to LUST
and it hurts because it was not supposed to be this way
skies were blue now their grey and i know you feel betrayed
but i understand . . .i knew i should of been the bigger man and
instead of ran i shouldve just stayed with you and held your hand
but i didnt and we were bestfreinds in love
but ever since that day it feels like their is none of the above
and i know . . .i feel like im rotten to the core too
but to be honest i still have feelings for you

verse 2

alot has happened now and i dont know were to begin
she finally forgave me and we might try it again
but ever since that day i became a bigger man
and its not that i dont love her i dont want 2 break her heart again
i love her to much to see her like that
because of somethin i did and its because of that fact that
i might end up filling her up with hate
but if i dont try again than thats a biffer mistake
but what ever road i take then i guess its just fate
its like im stuck between a rock and a really hard place
i never really wanted it to be like this
and all my freinds say dave dont worry bout that *****
but all that i reply is that you dont understand
its just somethin in the way that i feel about her damn
then they look at me like they just caught fear
cuz in my eyes they can see im holding back the tears
and i guess its weird for them to see another man cry
but i just cant hold it in anymore inside
so i cried on the phone and this is what i said
i dont want a relationship lets just remain freinds


i know its kinda sobby and sad but yeah lmao
 
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