just looking if there needs to be any tweaks or if anything could be improved!

i want a bottle of pills
not to get high
but to lay down and die
and i want a rope or a gun
just to sort out all the evil I've done
and i hate myself more then you'll ever know
cuz i dont share how i feel
i look in the mirror
and what do i see
the devil looking at me
i see the devil looking at me


and oh shit what a shame
i did it again
i did it again
my friends have moved on
and I'm all alone
i need to move on
and find a new home




i emptied the bottle again
im drunk in the park
passing out
in the dark
next time i should really abstain
from drinking my guts out
go straight to the black out




​and oh shit what a shame
i did it again
i did it again
my friends have moved on
and I'm all alone
i need to move on
and find a new home




i cant see the light at the end
im running in circles
moving the wrong way
all while I'm playing pretend
inside my mind
Everything fine

and oh shit what a shame
i did it again
i did it again
my friends have moved on
and I'm all alone
i need to move on

and find a new home