Just something I came up with; feedback appreciated.

berg2623

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What if we took this chance, and made it what its worth
I know the waters warm, I'm just waiting for you to jump first,
Your love is a liquid drug, and I'm starting to die of thirst,
but sometimes the shit you do doesn't make sense, I admit it hurts,
I don't care who knows it,
You're standing at the door, should I open it or close it?
maybe this is karma for how I treated women in the past,
Was I really that stupid, can this whole thing really last?
Why am I sitting here just waiting for minutes to pass?
Are you leaving?
Are you going?
Are you ever coming back?
Did I only see what I wanted to, did I ignore all the facts?
Am I thinking way too much, do you think I should relax?
Maybe I wanted it forever, am I clinging to the past?
When your life becomes a movie, will I be part of the cast?
Hope you know this is different, I'm not calling just to smash,
and baby if time is money, hope you help me spend this cash.
 
I think it's just another loveletter written in metaphors. These lyrics have meaning for you, not us, it's really hard to say anything else than cliches...
 
Gotta concur with Ray005. Great metaphors, but it feels more like a love letter for valentines day or something. But good stuff nonetheless
 
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