im trying to learn to write raps

[deegan]

i make beats alot and i wanted some vocals so i tried to rap to a beat i made could you tell me what you think although i am 11 and this is my first rap so its not very good https://soundcloud.com/d33gan/my-first-rap

 

[glutn]

11?Nice.i hope you arent trolling deegan.
Start off by saying who you are and where you were born.
Then..talk about the things you like,the things you cant stand,and why you love to live.
Talk about your friends.
Talk about the things you do on your freetime.
Dont forget to rap about your family and inspiration.

Start with that.

Ill wait for your reply and show you how i got started rhyming my lines.
I have a couple tactics.
Peace.
-Gus

 

[deegan]

iv actually given up on rapping imma just stick to my beats and im not trolling i was 11 when i wrote that im now 12 ot was my birthday a few days ago

 

[glutn]

Happy late birthday man!
I hope all goes well!

Well..if you change your mind..
I browse the site daily.

And if anyone else is reading..

I started out writing all the words i can think of that rhyme.(in a list)
Then writing them at the end of sentences.
Heres a short example.

Fire,required, liar,expire,flyer,buyer,

You have to hustle giving product to the BUYER ,
make sure you always serve it hot,hotter than the FIRE,
The expectation passes everything that is REQUIRED,
You turn the party out when your name's printed on the FLYER,

-Gus

 

[dannyrogers]

Record every 2 bars and change up flow every 2-4 bars

 

[maffbonn]

Read books and poetry. Emulate everything you learn.