bleachboyrecords
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How can I make my lyrics that use multi syllable rhymes catchier & just flow better
And I don't mean like 2 syllables, that's not really a problem. When I get to like 3 or 4 syllables that's when it starts to sound bad.
Here's an example...(And I know these bars are horrible, I put up the worst verse that I could find because I don't want people stealing my stuff).
Toxic, you probably don't know the name
Cause I'm struggling hoping one day that my flow is flames
I've felt so much pain
With no novacaine
Life's a gamble, like a poker game
And I still don't have the coldest chain
After all this time I have sold the same
Amount of gear so
It's still a zero
...Hahah it was so bad that I didn't bother to finish it
And I don't mean like 2 syllables, that's not really a problem. When I get to like 3 or 4 syllables that's when it starts to sound bad.
Here's an example...(And I know these bars are horrible, I put up the worst verse that I could find because I don't want people stealing my stuff).
Toxic, you probably don't know the name
Cause I'm struggling hoping one day that my flow is flames
I've felt so much pain
With no novacaine
Life's a gamble, like a poker game
And I still don't have the coldest chain
After all this time I have sold the same
Amount of gear so
It's still a zero
...Hahah it was so bad that I didn't bother to finish it