Gutty vs Bud Bunner

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Bud Bunner

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1 verse
18 bars
first to 3 votes wins

Buds Verse:


dont just be worrying about them aggressive rhymes, geezer
quality insurance wont be impressed with the rest of your lines either*1
this guys weaker, than my weener how will you rock the nation?
fag go swap the SD for an IV in your occupation*2
and drop the Coc.k your tasting stop talking bout tisha*3
if your her teacher she prolly looks like moesha with a face of pizza
i got more game than amiga, and that pics making me crease
cos gutty be pointing at randos latest release*4
your facing a beast! your the fakest on beats and im too hot
bruv you couldnt smoke bud if you were snoop dog
im hellish, and relish the chance to spit pellets
how you gunna have friends if you cant even spell it!*3
they call you gutty but going against me's in a duel is nutty
especially when you look like a 6 foot ball of putty
he aint called gutty cos hes from the gutter, he's raised in towns
with gays and clowns, its just cos 502 is his weight in pounds!!*5
my flows got ways to drown, so stick to raising ya kids
cos the only time your burn bud is when blazing a spliff

explanations:
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Gutty502 said:
ha, i got ya jim, it might take a little time for me to respond cuz i can only write while im not on a call at work... Quality insurence would nail me if i was like " i cut your fukin head off and i dont mean ur noggin"<<(whatever) they wouldnt like that too much, but ill battle with ya
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*2 HSD Specialist
*3
Gutty502 said:
dude my firned tisha is the shyt, shes like a female twista,
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*4 Avartar pic
*5 Gutty502

I rushed this out cos i was bored but **** it, its all personal...its on you gutty...
 
pick me up like a puzzle piece im puzzlin to arrange,
rubics cube i confuse and also boggle ya brain,
bring pane like i just installed ya windows,
and take away ya voice like i just slayed ur cresendo,
i just placed you in my tempo and gave ya guttys info,
replace ur dental and burn you in a rental ford tempo
im original the whole kit-in-kaboodle but simple,
it aint coincidental i bring rhyme fundamentals,
dui decimal ya medical arrange u alphaebetical,
and scatter ur rhymes, man fuk ur rhyme manuel
im straigher then a stencil with a pencil thats also heterosexual
my rhymes stank and bleed so my words on my menstrual,
a rhyme individual, im raw as chicken blood on my cuts,
and i burn almond cd's cuz you can CD's nuts,
you couldnt top me even if i was desert like sherbert,
send David Faustino to hell and u still wouldnt be a Bud Burner

David Faustino is the guy who played bud on married with children

there ya go, i guess we can go one verse and see who gets more votes


 
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lets get some votes on this then we'll decide if we do more

cool?
 
aiight thats cool, i just said that cuz im at work and were pretty busy today, and my mind cant focus, and i could when i get off at 5, but i also got a wife and 2 kids who are attention hungry soon as i get home, so...thats why cuz i dont knw if ill get to write anymore, but...well see,

nice verse by the way but i think this battle is beyond personals, cuz to be honest neither one of us have very many personals towards each other and any that we would have is gonna be elementary and pointless, and both of us have skill beyond some simple "Yo Gutty you a noth-ang why you frontin now, with yo N'Sync style dress shirt button down" dude, honestly i dont really care about these cracker jack personals that others have used, their retarted. this is the internet, you got time to write and then correct, so u better come with something complex and just bring it dude. If we was actually face to face battling, then yea personals would be the way to go, punches,multies,wordplay,and complexity should be the focus here>>>>>>this is all just my opinion as well
 
Tbh, even on forums etc where u dont know your opponent

personals are the number one weapon, personals from there profile/signature/avartar/previous posts

cos personals are the hardest form of a punch when in a battle/diss track scenerio, if you can make a decent personal out of not much ammo then your good.

Personals/Punches/Multies <--in that order are always my focus with alot of humor and some aggression

different opinons tho...

cool gutty, lets get some votes now then...
 
k mine goes to Bud, it was just more interesting, complex, in my opinion. Sick verses from the both of you though, something fp hasn't seen in a while...
 
ummm, vote dont count, explain more, state fav lines, weak lines, punches.

Wow, and to be honest i didnt think bud would get votes, his flow do me didnt have a good rhythm, and kinda simple and rhymes were predictable, but regardless, i still would like more explanation from bigwon

>>>add on>>>and he had a lot of fag jokes, i threw not one
 
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i had like two fag jokes that connected to the same punchline...

my flow was the same as all my verses...same rhyme scheme altho i ignored following on from last multi at times and starting again with fresh bar

but you definitly had the more simple flow gutty, no hate or nuttin u know im cool with you but bigwon was right by saying my verse was more complex. You didnt have too many hard hittin punches directly at me rather than random ones. Still a good verse tho, no doubt.

ill pm him and get him to improve his vote
 
ok heres what im talkin bout bud, i know a vote from me dont count but heres my view on ur verse


dont just be worrying about them aggressive rhymes, geezer
quality insurance wont be impressed with the rest of your lines either*1
>>>ok, im a geezer? im not old

this guys weaker, than my weener how will you rock the nation?
fag go swap the SD for an IV in your occupation*2
>>>why is ur weener weak?HAHA u clowned urself, and wtf is an SD

and drop the Coc.k your tasting stop talking bout tisha*3
if your her teacher she prolly looks like moesha with a face of pizza
>>>weak 2/10 how does drop the coc.k and my frined tisha have anything in common? and a face of pizza? ok...

i got more game than amiga, and that pics making me crease
cos gutty be pointing at randos latest release*4
>>>whats amiga? why does my pic make u crease? and im not pointing in my picture, my hands on my beard

your facing a beast! your the fakest on beats and im too hot
bruv you couldnt smoke bud if you were snoop dog
>>>real, reAL, REAL predictable line

im hellish, and relish the chance to spit pellets
how you gunna have friends if you cant even spell it!*3
>>>1st line was ok but 2nd line didnt follow the scheme, and ok yea my spelling was wrong, GREAT

they call you gutty but going against me's in a duel is nutty
especially when you look like a 6 foot ball of putty
>>>again, real predictable, and i look like a 6ft ball of putty? WEAK

he aint called gutty cos hes from the gutter, he's raised in towns
with gays and clowns, its just cos 502 is his weight in pounds!!*5
>>>towns,clowns,pounds? Real weak pointless line

my flows got ways to drown, so stick to raising ya kids
cos the only time your burn bud is when blazing a spliff
>>>again, another real weak pointless line

overall bud, it wasnt real good, ive heard a lot better from you and i was expecting a little more

and btw...i had 2 personals in there on you, just didnt point em out, i clowned ur rhyme manuel and ur name, comparing u to bud from married with children but i dont know if that show was ever popular in the UK
 
My vote goes to Bud

i dont know wut kind of rap battles yall be fukin with but the ones of seen (and i have seen a few) whether its me and my boys battlin or a dvd its pretty much based around personals. 8 Mile? Dont get me wrong though Gutty ur sh1t was tight but i personally feel like this one goes to Bud cause u didnt throw no personals at him
 
dude i had 2 personals on him

bud has a rhyme manuel out, which is redicoulous someone would need to read a manuel

and also i clowned his name bud burner i said he could send the son from married with childern to hell and he still wouldnt be a bud burner

but its whatever, i aint mad, jst dont understand, i dont think people can read my stuff and get my rhythm for some reason, and again im not mad, a votes a vote but i layed out how i think about ur verse bud, i dont know maybe ill start spittin more simple ish and people will like it more
 
its whatever man, i think that my deliverence can not be placed by simply reading my words, i like audio battles better, if bud is up for one,
 
its still about the content tho...

personals win battles then punches....every forum u goto the battles will have personals even if its just something theyve said on the forum before...its bud bunner btw nor bud burner, but both of those personals werent flipped in a very hard hitting way - no hate again u know im cool with you

p.s - its not a manual its a guide that helps newbies understand the technical aspects more - you can never stop learning - full blown superproducers are getting new techniques all the time

Gitme? anyway **** the chat, just votes
 
Gutty502 said:
just saw your post about my verse let me explain

dont just be worrying about them aggressive rhymes, geezer
quality insurance wont be impressed with the rest of your lines either*1
>>>geezer dont mean old, it means boy/man and this is a personal

this guys weaker, than my weener how will you rock the nation?
fag go swap the SD for an IV in your occupation*2
>>>weeners arnt strong, every try doing weights with your dick, didnt think so...HSD - swap letters SD for IV - HIV Specalist

and drop the Coc.k your tasting stop talking bout tisha*3
if your her teacher she prolly looks like moesha with a face of pizza
>>>**** thing flows on from last punchline, pizzaface is someone with loads of spots

i got more game than amiga, and that pics making me crease
cos gutty be pointing at randos latest release*4
>>>your finger is pointed towards your chin, i dont belive you dont know what an amiga is. One of the first computer consoles

your facing a beast! your the fakest on beats and im too hot
bruv you couldnt smoke bud if you were snoop dog
>>>maybe predictable but it works and is a punch

im hellish, and relish the chance to spit pellets
how you gunna have friends if you cant even spell it!*3
>>>its a personal...setup line doesnt always have to connect

they call you gutty but going against me's in a duel is nutty
especially when you look like a 6 foot ball of putty
>>>the whole point is the humor in the imagery of you being a fat ball of putty

he aint called gutty cos hes from the gutter, he's raised in towns
with gays and clowns, its just cos 502 is his weight in pounds!!*5
>>>basically callin u fat, breaking down gutty502

my flows got ways to drown, so stick to raising ya kids
cos the only time your burn bud is when blazing a spliff
>>>it is still a punchline

this verse was littered with punches and personals which are the main two ingredients and was backed up with multies
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good battle lyrics are good battle lyrics weither delivered in anyway because its the content that counts, good delivery just enhances the content

Lets try and cut out the bull**** talk now and get some votes

nah no audio at the moment cos im waiting on new mic and more memory, not even recording tracks atm
 
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wow then most the crap ur spittin must be a uk thing, a geezer means boy? not here in the states
okay the hsd hiv line was ok, too bad my profiles not updated and thats not my title anymore, but still the line was clever
the pizza face line was still weak
still never heard of amiga
snoop dogg line to me was not a punch cuz its predictable
i dont know dude, like i said its still better then a lot of cats that drop stuff, but this is nowhere near what ive read from you,
 
like i said i rushed it but in my personal opinon i thought u would come harder but looks like i done enough cos i had alot of personals and punches

the snoop dogg line is still a punch weither a predictable one or not...

geezer is cockney slang, therefore ill stick with the english meaning

dont believe u aint heard of amiga tho...

amiga and commordores where the consoles before nintendo and sega...they were THE thing in the years of your childhood

anyway lets get some votes in now

2-0 to me if were counting both votes
 
i dont know dude, for real im done! i was expecting more from u actually, and i was hoping to have you fuel my fire but u didnt, thats why i said i guess we will just use one verse cuz urs didnt hit me, and no im not lying ive never heard of amiga, i hope u dont mean atari cuz that be funny, but for real im done dude. Im done waisting my lines, but look, of course im still cool with you and all, no beef its just i didnt feel you cam very hard, real unoriginal
 
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