Feedback On My Song Please

[Rashaan20]

Hello everyone,

Attached is a song I'm working on. Feel free to give me feedback and tell me what you guys think.

 

[Avora]

"...they got everything stuffed under the fitted". Bruh that sounded real cool. Your flow on this beat, works. Finish the song dude.

https://soundcloud.com/okt_vibes

 

[MyNameisSoulace]

on point my dude. love the flow. i could hear some crackle in your voice but just keep recording and you'll get it right. keep writing and moving!

 

[BezserkerProductions]

Chill track. Flow goes to the beat. Keep at it.