Feedback On Lyrics

Ratookah

New member
Im new here and today hopefully I'll be done with my first track it's almost done and these are the lyrics so far
Lyrics:
Tryna live free but system
Has set up so many restrictions
It's hard to say Americas the
Land of the free when we see
taxation as the right thing but
Its not its more like theft how
Can you take a percentage
Out what I worked for not even
To benefit me just to keep yourself Rich man i swear life is a *****
But I'll never stand down I'll
Speak my mind on everything
To others that seem fine but really
Aren't cuz they're not exposed to
The truth so when i get in booth
It's all you hear while the beat
Serenates your ears and as
I tune to the frequencies I see
Life differently and my views had
Me outcasted by others it's all good
Because I know where my real
Brothers stand beside me
shining light upon
Me making me feel divine like
The lyrics you hear from line
To line im still looking for the
Purpose of life if I can't find it
Before I die can I say what I live
For is right but it's all good only
Time can guide me to where
I need to be
 
I see the topic, but I can't grasp any sort of flow when putting this out loud.
 
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