namegoeshere
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Lyrics FEEDBACK PLEASE!!!!
Hi! I am thinking of producing a drumstep song, and wondered if these lyrics I made to base it on are very good:
Where do I go from here?
Can't anyone make it clear?
Is it time? (X2)
Please don't leave
Please don't go
Cause I won't leave
I won't go
You should know
It's time (x3)
*super crazy drop of sheer awesomeness and stuff*
Forever isn't enough (x2)
*music calms down*
Endings will change
Is today the day?
Beginnings will change
Today is the day
So just let the base
Take you away
Just let the base
take you away
*FINAL BAAAAAASSEE DROOPP*
It won't take long
Forever is never enough (x3)
*end of drop, slows down rapidly*
It is time
For us to leave
Just to be reunited
I also wanted to know if a duet with female vocals would work with this...
All feedback is appreciated and I am only 12 so don't make this a s**tstorm of trolls. Thx =D
Hi! I am thinking of producing a drumstep song, and wondered if these lyrics I made to base it on are very good:
Where do I go from here?
Can't anyone make it clear?
Is it time? (X2)
Please don't leave
Please don't go
Cause I won't leave
I won't go
You should know
It's time (x3)
*super crazy drop of sheer awesomeness and stuff*
Forever isn't enough (x2)
*music calms down*
Endings will change
Is today the day?
Beginnings will change
Today is the day
So just let the base
Take you away
Just let the base
take you away
*FINAL BAAAAAASSEE DROOPP*
It won't take long
Forever is never enough (x3)
*end of drop, slows down rapidly*
It is time
For us to leave
Just to be reunited
I also wanted to know if a duet with female vocals would work with this...
All feedback is appreciated and I am only 12 so don't make this a s**tstorm of trolls. Thx =D
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