i know the mixing isn't great but i'm more focused on lyricism, flow and voice right now. so i'd like to hear more criticism on those elements but any input is appreciated!
https://soundcloud.com/jake_hanson/psychonaut
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I'm a psychonaut, tripping became a test to me,
Psychedelics teach me and breathe life into my destiny,
When I'm feeling stressed never let em get the best of me,
I'm in my head manifesting the effects of ecstasy,
So I don't give a f*ck, if anyone thinks less of me,
Especially when I recklessly decrease my life expectancy,
Don't mess with me, I promise I won't be pleasant presently
Like pregnancy, taking it to the next level heavily
With perplexity, speaking to your mind open sesame
In discrepancy, mastering the technique of telepathy
For weaponry, continuing to nod my head restlessly,
Disrespect without regret, I'm seizing all your equity,
In a single check to me, I'm alive and I feel blessed to be,
But I haven't learned my lesson I'm going back to the dope ces and g!
Mixing them together to complete the whole recipe,
Is what I needed for me to be able to reach serenity,
Because I know nothing is infinite within this symphony,
If it was the universe would literally be different visually,
Unless your religion gives you the ability to live blissfully
Youre like a typical minister who's just thinking wishfully,
Using that shit as an excuse to act wickedly,
Is a cynical joke to help evolutions efficiency,
B*tch*s live in fantasies pretending they can get with me,
Watch me f*ck the industry until it gets an injury,
Im the epitome of what it means to be the centerpiece,
Unleashing my inner beast to maintain this simple peace,
Balancing my energy extinguishing what limits me
While opening my chakras experiencing liberty,
Cancels out misery because I'm looking inwardly
Before attempting synergy between friends and enemies
Mentally I'm focused on extra sensory imagery
I'll probably pay the penalty of losing all my memories
But I'll make history remember me through centuries!
https://soundcloud.com/jake_hanson/psychonaut
Like it or not
I'm a psychonaut, tripping became a test to me,
Psychedelics teach me and breathe life into my destiny,
When I'm feeling stressed never let em get the best of me,
I'm in my head manifesting the effects of ecstasy,
So I don't give a f*ck, if anyone thinks less of me,
Especially when I recklessly decrease my life expectancy,
Don't mess with me, I promise I won't be pleasant presently
Like pregnancy, taking it to the next level heavily
With perplexity, speaking to your mind open sesame
In discrepancy, mastering the technique of telepathy
For weaponry, continuing to nod my head restlessly,
Disrespect without regret, I'm seizing all your equity,
In a single check to me, I'm alive and I feel blessed to be,
But I haven't learned my lesson I'm going back to the dope ces and g!
Mixing them together to complete the whole recipe,
Is what I needed for me to be able to reach serenity,
Because I know nothing is infinite within this symphony,
If it was the universe would literally be different visually,
Unless your religion gives you the ability to live blissfully
Youre like a typical minister who's just thinking wishfully,
Using that shit as an excuse to act wickedly,
Is a cynical joke to help evolutions efficiency,
B*tch*s live in fantasies pretending they can get with me,
Watch me f*ck the industry until it gets an injury,
Im the epitome of what it means to be the centerpiece,
Unleashing my inner beast to maintain this simple peace,
Balancing my energy extinguishing what limits me
While opening my chakras experiencing liberty,
Cancels out misery because I'm looking inwardly
Before attempting synergy between friends and enemies
Mentally I'm focused on extra sensory imagery
I'll probably pay the penalty of losing all my memories
But I'll make history remember me through centuries!