good work dude
wow such a good track like how you sound like nas bro, keep up the good work!!
I don't know a whole lot about rap but something general that was kinda bugging me is that your voice isn't really 100% intergrated with the beat, I would look a little more about what you say and when you say it, really make it flow with the beat. (its not as bad as I make it sound) and ofc, extend it
Thanks, constructive criticism.