can i get a reveiw in this verse ?

[L4M3O]

when ur rappin u hav 2 make sure u telling the listner sumthin they've never heard before. the avg hip hop listner cud rap at a basic level. even most producers can rap a basic level. step up ya wordplay nd vocab

 

[bricksqd7]

****in waaack.

 

[conzcept]

once again this is an old verse so go ahead and say its wack or whatever i dont care lol i have increased my skill level by alot so keep hating brah haha

 

[DSanchez_AlterEgoist]

It reads like way to simplistic of a flow. You should also layer your bars. its a good way to transition.

 

[CaritaPluemero]

cabbage soup diet

Excellent learn, I simply passed this onto a colleague who was doing a little analysis on that.