Bigwon vs Bud Bunner

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Bud Bunner

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I got stoned and kept writing and writing but i thought fuk it in the end, cos im sure you dont mind making this abit more epic ;) saying that tho, i didnt bother digging up pics and past statements on FP so coulda been harder on the personal side but i still got quite a few.

so heres the new rules..

34bars each
One Verse each
First to 3 Votes
Broken down or well explained votes only
No fraff posts in here, just verses and votes

Heres my Verse:

what pussy can throw punches? cos this kunt-couldnt
so you shouldnt have a W (win) like the number one-shouldnt!*1
your tongues-wooden so you cant spit and your scared-of-the-hustle
cos all of your dogs lack bite like there 'wearing-a-muzzle
you struggle to drop shyt...are you constapated-or-something?
Calling yourself Bigwon?, that must be compensating-for-something!!
honest-mate,-im-hunting, blunting a pencil-with-just-one-rap
your talented at being beaten!, you'd have potential-as-a-punchback
and man, i love slapping arses its as if i like-the-spanking
this dicks way to whack like a guys guide-to-wanking
so im tryna find a knife-to-shank-him mite throw-a-steely-axe
so if you diss me your fuking dead like necrophilac's
this next-foes-really-trash he'll spit raps and get-a-fright
Your lines only dope when there red(read)-in-white (white/Cocaine)*2
Right! you really aint hood-son...we're different-kid!
and the difference-is, if i posted once a day id make it a good-one!*3
my hooks-stun i breathe fire and cook-lungs,-with-heat
bruv, you wouldnt eat bud even if you cooked skunk-and-weed
for lunch-its-beef your under-seige, cos im shyt-hot
make hustlers jump like kriss-kross gripping rick-ross in a wrist-lock
me and hip-hop cum together like we tried to share-a-rubber
shyt, you dicks are double pussy like when guys share-a-lover
wheres your mother...cos muthafuka i pimp-whores!
and your such a fag that you live IN prince-George!*4
everything i thinks-raw, im king-your a crackhead pauper
the type of son to make a mum wish she only had a daughter
bruv, i slaughter-my-foes with water-like-flows
i give abort orders-to-souls then torture-there-ghosts
spit swords-from-my-throat im pure-vexed-and-bytch
ill sure-dead-a-snitch punches hit his jaw-head-and-ribs
incase you forget-its-sick when this kid-pens-bars
i writ-memoirs saying Imma kill you son like chris-benoit!!
when men-spar and fists-swung a lip-punch'll flip and lift-kunts
your names a lie!, cos after this voters wont say that big-won
*1 BigWon/BigOne
*2 Red and White is his soundclick name
*3 profile says he averages 1 Post a day
*4 Lives in Prince George, Canada
If you dont get the rest of the punches, your dumb ;)....nah ask me

Match it...
 
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here we go...

you took a hit, are you telling me your nervous *****?
with this verse i'll rip you up like mans services
does his family **** it, this bland emcee's awkward
doing laps in pool of tar, just plan to be stuck kid
enough of this is just a time for internet researches
life do you have on? should i disconnect your wee urges
of your cuming? at least try to reach the surface
that's right you got a condom on this beetch is worthless
on any term, any instrumental, any hip hop verse
spitting more i wonder if you'd get shot first
talking about hard knocking it, you haven't even tapped the door
it's hard beleiving that you rapped before
bud bunner? talk about a bud boner
this dudes stoned to **** thinking he's going up and over
enough this soldier already lost his life on the feiled
not thinking twice of his action brings him a sacrificed failed
U.K? yeah united you stand divided you fall
yeah your friend i bet he didn't like it at all
yeah you might get a brawl with exchange in punches
with my fists i circulate flames when im on this
range in the compass i know were to go
contrast to your flow, prepare for no more
then pat on the head this dudes over confident
him beating me is like suffocating on oxygen
on beat you cover up stink with stink like cheap deoderant
on hiphop your peeps be loitering
like programmers you work on nothing but 'soft wears'
enough here your clown whether on or off air
1st a touch of death? now a bud? next you could be
a chimp with a pink jacket the best to compete
i bet even if i knew which city you lived in i'd never find you
moms basement with star wars toys trying to ryhme thru
a thirty two add one then letter in brail
then you see the degree which im better in skill

ahhh...don't really care who wins, bud i like that 'read and white' line.....props on the verse...
 
Vote: Bud Bunner

Both were above good, however Bigwon, I don't think you really tried, I just get a feeling that you were rhyming for the sake of getting the battle over with. Bud burner, I think you tried too much trying to explain everything and making so many punchlines. Although
Bud Bunner said:
everything i thinks-raw, im king-your a crackhead pauper
the type of son to make a mum wish she only had a daughter
bruv, i slaughter-my-foes with water-like-flows
i give abort orders-to-souls then torture-there-ghosts
spit swords-from-my-throat im pure-vexed-and-bytch
ill sure-dead-a-snitch punches hit his jaw-head-and-ribs
incase you forget-its-sick when this kid-pens-bars
i writ-memoirs saying Imma kill you son like chris-benoit!!
That whole part right there was sick, that's the reason you won. It should be as simple as that. I do think you're trying to hard with all these punchlines though, you don't have to put so much. Sometimes just writing something that flows like crazy can win a battle. Good battle. Both had good verses.
 
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No.

Punchlines and Personals are the main ingredient of a battle and should be included on every other bar atleast. Personals/Punches/Wordplay/Multies and Flow < in that order of importance.

I explained some punches/personals because i dont want people thinking the punch is whack cos they dont understand it. Its mainly only personals that i point out cos some people might not know the things i know. On the old forum i was on, every emcee does his research for personals on his opponent. Previous statements on forum, forum profile, myspace page, pics, signature....anything. It took me no longer than 30 mins to write and 15 mins to get the personals together.

anyway thats just how we do things, packed fulla personals and punches backed up with multies. Thanks for the vote and props tho. Big up Bigwon aswell (i like the red and white bar aswell)
 
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No, you misunderstand me, I'm saying it's not all about that, I'm saying you're overdoing it. For example, if you go to a club, they're having a battle tournament and you battle someone you never seen before you just have to work with the most obvious things, The crowd is not gonna want an explanation of everything you say. I mean all it's cool that you went through that much trouble and came up a rhyme, but don't over do it. By the way you seem to think YOUR way of battling/rapping is the absolute right way, you can think that, that doesn't make it true. Same goes for me or anyone. In the end, it's the audience's job to pick who wins. Sadly this thread didn't get much votes. Like I said before both you still had some good verses.
 
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sg i think i'd have to disagree with you....as this isn't a club, it's a written on a website it you can't just base it on surroundings. it's like the pre written battles you see, except without the face to face....And with the personals and such, it's better to explain them because if someone read that "read in white" line they'd have no clue what he was talking about unless....

*2 Red and White is his soundclick name

but im not too big on text battles myself so...it's just another 2 cents..

yeah though, any more votes to conclude this would be sweet...
 
that is what im saying SG, As its not a club and people mite not know what ive researched about the opponent it has to be explained, otherwise they mite not get it and its a waste of a bar.

In a club the audience can see who ur battling so can you and you cant research things as specific as some of the things you diss opponents about on forums.

My view on the ingreidents of battling is pretty much shared by everyone, well a very very large majority anyway. Ive battled on alot of forums and its all about personals/punches/wordplay/advanced multies and flow < in that order

Thanks for the feedback tho, can we get some more votes on this and cut out the fraff now.
 
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