~beat block.. need feedback. feed for feed~

[Supersevron]

yea... i have been in this block for probably a month or so... maybe longer mayber shorter idk...

this is the first beat i have actually been able to finish and i didnt think it sounded too bad.

id really appreciate it fp if yall could chime in and really give some harsh critism to try and help me get back on track.

HMM by supersevron on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

dont be short in your response and i will happily return your feedback, like your tracks, follow you, whatever!

thanks fp

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really?

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come on!

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(crickets chirping)

[MrGui]

Nice track, i wasn't expecting it to be so good for a first one, but it's a strong track, powerful but you should mix the highs a bit better because although it is supposed to sound harsh it's kinda annoying to the years. The composition is simple but sets a good vibe and overall the track is actually pretty good. Keep it up.

Please check my thread if you can: New Track: KRS-ONE - Ah yeah (Remix). All Feedback Returned.

[jakeclinder]

i need a bigger bass drum, layer it, or just brijng it up fun in the mix. everything sounds like it has a lot of reverb. sometimes i like having each instrument have their own reverb settings. the bass drum, especially, dosnt need as much.

instrumentation and composition of the beat is cool though, keep it up!

sampled beat with a verse on it

[illestrait]

Nice beat for where you're coming from. As previously stated mixing the Hi's are very necessary as it is quite harsh on the hears. Good buildups throughout the track, and nice composition. Good track overall, just needs a little fine-tuning on those minor elements to get it to sound right. Good work! Now just keep doing it. I'd appreciate if you can return the feedback. illestrait - Nothing | FEED 4 FEED

[Supersevron]

i made some of the adjustments yal spoke of and tried to better the track. its up again under the same link if youd like to give it a listen