Okay I'm listening via adam's monitors. Vocals could have been mixed better, whole mix sounded dry and one dimensional. Wide the track out add some effects etc etc..other then that it sounded cool
Okay I'm listening via adam's monitors. Vocals could have been mixed better, whole mix sounded dry and one dimensional. Wide the track out add some effects etc etc..other then that it sounded cool
can you elaborate please? what do you mean by dry and 1-dimensional? are you referring to to panning things left and right? I want it to have a full sound, how do i avoid it being one dimensional? it sounded alright on my speakers but i don't have studio monitors so I can't distinguish every little intricacy
I love the sample in this beat. I think it needs some change ups to keep it from being repetitive but everything sounds legit. Great work. PS. Rapper sounds eerily similar to Big Sean.
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Great sample, drums are legit but a bit boring. A bass would maybe be nice. Mixing wise it's good, at least on my system.
Really liked the track. Respect!
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Last edited by dylan_wtf; 07-02-2012 at 11:33 AM.
At 0:18 The line " Dream Chaser caught my ear " Great lyrics. Would be awesome to hear a bit more of that line with in the track. I hear a lot of a confidence in your voice. I wanna hear more
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Last edited by zeblazed; 07-02-2012 at 11:41 AM.
I like the chops, and the flows very laid back, I like it... I could just lay back and chill out to this! Very good work!
Overall? NICE. Rapper simply flows nice, and he does sound like Big Sean. Great Track man. Nothing left to say. KEEP GRINDING.
Whats going on fam. Thanks for the feedback. The mix doesn't sounds bad, you need to de-ess those vocals though. Sounds like an amateur mix, but a GOOD amateur mix. If that makes sense. Beats dope, lol. Some quick chops eh and some drums huh? Good shit though, good music, ya boy sounds a bit like BigSean. Keep up the grind, i'll see you around the form,
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Good job with everything, honestly. Do de-ess the vocals, like itzdlo said. Honestly, I can't say I have any big beef with this track. Keep grinding!
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