Verse - Feed Me

[ChrioniBlack]

Looking for feedback on whether or not this track is project worthy. It's still a work in progress, but this is pretty much it.

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FB pls.

[Nait Phoenix]

If that's a work in progress, I need to hear more of your finished work. That was a pretty slick rap, and that beat, although minimal, was just enough to get your point across. It's usually the minimalistic beats that add more power onto the words of the rapper, so that was pretty good. Keep working with it and I'm sure you'll get the product YOU want!

[ChrioniBlack]

Dig it. Thank you. I feel it still needs a little work, but I've moved on.

I listened to your track. It's strange. Very advanced. The mix sounds seamless. What did you envision would happen with it when you made it?

[Nait Phoenix]

It's sort of a confusing type of sorts. I was really envisioning how popular music is taking the very basic dance-pop route with a "dubstep" breakdown and how I wanted to flip it. Dubstep is really fun to write to if you are utilizing the dubstep part throughout the song instead of only in the bridge part.

I'm not sure if that's the answer you were looking for.

[ChrioniBlack]

Yeeeaahh. Dig it. It's like cybernetic-dub-dance.

[drage21]

i like this bro, the beats real nice, i like your flow real nice, i like your style that faster flow, your lyrics are real nice, you got talent bro, keep pushing bro

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