Uptempo Club/Movie Beat *feedback appreciated & returned!*

[Jpanther]

Hey fellas/ladies, please check out this beat, the link is below. Just trying to get some feedback on the mix, improvements, etc. Constructive criticism is welcome and will be returned. Thanks in advance, Peace!

http://soundcloud.com/jpanther-vb/jp...instrumental-2

[lil antman]

sup man...

overall pretty decent man just really try to pay attention to the sounds you choose b/c they are the basis of how good your shit sounds....but your on the right track keep it up

[pos1den]

Like the breakdown. Dark sounding. Good beat overall.
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[Jpanther]

Thanks, feedback returned.

[NeimanTyler]

i like the sections in the beat with the most instrumentation...you should work on song structure...the breakdown was a nice touch though...keep grinding. good job.

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[dpomykacz]

Nice work! I really like when that crazy synth comes in; I guess that's the hook? I like the dark feel this track gives off.
I would suggest focusing on your percussion sounds. The patterns are nice, but the clap and hihats sound very stock. Even just a little reverb/delay on the clap will make it sound 10x better.
Keep up the great work!

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[352Don]

Good mix and melodies, just thought some of the kicks were off beat a lil... gud work tho