New Yg/DJ Mustard type beat! Feed for Feed!

The melody is catchy that bell doesn't fit its random imo. Its a good foundation where its at right now. Are you planning on touching the beat again?
Feedback my work in progress in the link below thanks
 
The melody is catchy that bell doesn't fit its random imo. Its a good foundation where its at right now. Are you planning on touching the beat again?
Feedback my work in progress in the link below thanks
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Thx for your honest feedback! Yeah maybe.
 
Yo fam just update your kits, check out the ones Superstar O has for sale on his site, the 808 isn't hot can't lie it takes away from the track, this one has potential to be dope af its deserving of a real fat kick that really brings out that cali feel, Also thee bell is mixed in there pretty decently but it tends to linger so it gets kind of annoying try to just like keep the same melody but let a different instrument play it. Also do me a solid check out my soundcloud Any love shown will be returned
 
Really well done friend - your sound is actually really commercial (and I of course mean that in a good way) and would do very well with a mainstream rap artist. I agree the tubular bell seemed a bit odd - I actually love the sample but I might recommend using some saturation and compression on it to give it that "hip hop" grime.

Nice auto panning with that snare. I think the synth bass could actually have come up a bit, especially in the mid frequencies (I like the patch you chose!).

Overall great work – keep it up my friend!

I recently made a remix of Chromeo’s “Jealous (I Ain’t With It)” for a competition – I would very much appreciate your feedback on it, and if enjoy it I ask you to please click “vote.” It can be heard at this link:

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cratehead said:
This could be dope, but as mentioned the 808 really takes away. This is a cool base though, the synth part is dope and the perc is nice but could use some more processing. The main setback for me is that it IS a DJ MUstard type beat. Nothing wrong with that, but I'd try to develop your own style as well as working on technical skills.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-new-smooth-sampled-beat-480088/#post49810873
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Thx for your feedback. Your track is also dope sounds really professional from mixing and i like that sample.
 
hcgaron said:
Really well done friend - your sound is actually really commercial (and I of course mean that in a good way) and would do very well with a mainstream rap artist. I agree the tubular bell seemed a bit odd - I actually love the sample but I might recommend using some saturation and compression on it to give it that "hip hop" grime.

Nice auto panning with that snare. I think the synth bass could actually have come up a bit, especially in the mid frequencies (I like the patch you chose!).

Overall great work – keep it up my friend!

I recently made a remix of Chromeo’s “Jealous (I Ain’t With It)” for a competition – I would very much appreciate your feedback on it, and if enjoy it I ask you to please click “vote.” It can be heard at this link:

https://www.indabamusic.com/opportu...missions/c0371f18-f18b-11e3-ad95-22000b2410cc

One small vote could help me achieve my dreams – but only if you feel it is deserving!

Cheers!
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Thx for that honest feedback. I listened to your remix you made.
Its not my style but this sounds really clean. Well done.
 
Main Sample (keys) : I dig the melody and am 50/50 about the sound of it. 1/2 of me is like cool the other 1/2 is saying to amateur sounding. The better half of me is saying to work on making it sound more authentic I think it will turn up the fire from medium to HI
Drum Line - iLL (no need to say no mas) I love that Dirty kick you bang in there.
Syth - Same thing with the synth, something with a little more power, more fullness in the mid to high areas.
If those two things where addressed you would have a certified banger. Beat is still hot without making these adjustments though. Keep doing your things fam!

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24FITMAN said:
Main Sample (keys) : I dig the melody and am 50/50 about the sound of it. 1/2 of me is like cool the other 1/2 is saying to amateur sounding. The better half of me is saying to work on making it sound more authentic I think it will turn up the fire from medium to HI
Drum Line - iLL (no need to say no mas) I love that Dirty kick you bang in there.
Syth - Same thing with the synth, something with a little more power, more fullness in the mid to high areas.
If those two things where addressed you would have a certified banger. Beat is still hot without making these adjustments though. Keep doing your things fam!

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https://www.futureproducers.com/for...aq-104-lift-up-continued-480287/#post49811884
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Thx for your honest critics.
I will keep that in mind.
 
d1gd33p said:
what did you layer the kick with ... i was expecting that 808 to explode through the track ... i think the layering you have over the kick is too much ... imo less is more and when you took that layer off that my favorite part of the beat. check me out https://www.futureproducers.com/for...outh-etc/3-new-beats-f4f-480291/#post49811923
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Thx for your feedback.
No this was a kick already sounding like this. I chose it because the other standard kicks sound boring to me.
 
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