Nice sample and rap.
Yeah I can hear that you used headphones to mix (low bass and not hard drums)
But it has potential.
For headphones mix is not bad.
I hear alot of Pac influence in your delivery, bar structure and lyrical content. I hit replay fasho..great delivery..the mix sounds very good, I mix exclusively on cans as i can hear every little deal. Great song buddy, i wouldnt change a thing..Thanks for sharing
Not to beat a dead horse but you can hear the pac influence in your verses which isn't a bad thing at all. I'm really digging this track, The mix is tight. Everything sounds full and together. Sometimes headphones help to get a better idea of the stereo image and to be sure that the mix is clear. This is apparent in this song.
I appreciate the backfeed so far..I feel like an ******* everytime someone brings up the Pac thing..cuz i dont do it on purpose its just me..but this is just a hobby of mine , for the love of music..I'm still learning but you guys on this site taught me how to mix better and I appreciate that
cool shit here....as talked bout before the Pac influence is there but if the content is in that direction of his you could stray away from that misnomer. otherwise i really like your stuff man. i know i said it before. keep it up
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your vocals sound pretty good to be mixed in headphones, u sound like pac sometimes lol seriously
his a legend, it's a compliment
you got a good voice for rappin, and the chorus is on point. love the message u deliver in the second verse,
tired of bubblegum rap.
I'm liking the beat. Very vibey. Vox mix is good. The beat mix is good imo, except for the low end, which sounds way too muddy for my taste. I like to hear more of a knock in the kick. That being said, the composition is great, and I can tell you put a lot of work into this. Good work overall, keep it up!