New Hip Hop Instrumental! (F4F)

I like the more electronic route you're trying out with while still keeping your signature keys and brass going! Def a fun track for you and the mixes all sound good. Good instrumentation, but I'd like to hear some fuller chords on the piano - maybe use octaves on the low notes, but keep the playing with the right hand going like you have for the outro. This song reminds me of Nujabes, so great job!!

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- I think the instrumentation is cool
- I felt you could've chose better instruments -- the piano and the brass feel kind of "cheap"
- I think the 808 is too over powering in the beat -- maybe turn it down a little -- though i do like the way it hits
- The piano section at the end is cool
 
Yo I didn't know you changed your name on soundcloud. This definitely has your sound in it. You switched it up this time though, I feel like you should make the melody with the horns a little more refined. Maybe a realer sounding ensemble or something. The drums are good but I would clean up the 808, you should make it more crisp. Now that I know this is you I'll keep up with your work. Good job man



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