New Freestyle Sampled C.R.E.A.M. NYC Gritty Sound! F4F

[paradise]

Good evening FP,

For The City, From The City from Paradise also produced by Paradise. Let me know how you feel!

 

[Donta Black]

I felt the intro was irrelevant, I like you vocal presence, the vocal mix could be better, but I like your flow and lyrics, keep it up. Check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ty-south-etc/mixtape-ngfl-feed-4-feed-491665/

 

[Nipharu]

I'm gonna echo the vocal mix comment. The intro didn't really fit imo. Caught myself nodding my head to this, your flow was nice on the beat , and the sounds for the beat were interesting, and your lyrics were interesting man I was digging them. I personally preferred the segment with the C.R.E.A.M sample, but altogether the parts of the song were nice.

Feedback?

 

[d1gd33p]

nice switch up ... snare needs some work ... it sounds like its in the background ... kick could use more bump ... mix could be better ... as stated before the intro doesnt make sense with the beat ... keep it up

check me out https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-dirty-south-etc/new-chop-n-bop-f4f-491641/2/