I like the part when the minor melody plays.. think it was the chorus. The vocals off tune gave it a cool feel while I think an on tune vocal could've done so too. Nice work.
I hear that melody everytime it is so familiar to me and it is a very simple main melody man. But your rhythm and other effects are cool to me. How many years are you making beats?
this is cool, i like the warmth and the concepts you have going on. it is a little bit sparse at some places, maybe try to bring some of the background elements up in the mix a bit. keep working!
Its got that west coast kind of vibe to it. Though I think its jumping around too much.
Construction of the beat could use some work. Kick snare are nicely mixed but the other instruments feel like they could use some mixing work.
Otherwise cool idea though feels like its not complete by any means.
Keep it up. Thanks for the feedback on my track.