New beat to be the feature on ep. //F4F// Your harshest criticism please.

Keez2040

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This will be THE song on an upcoming ep so I want it to be as close to perfect as possible. If you have any ideas for synths to use I would appreciate it. Otherwise give me your opinions/criticism be as brutal as you can. I'm on my way to work now but I will return all feedback as soon as I get home. Thanks all and keep grinding.







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That sample/loop was used somewhere before making it tougher for you cause everybody's going to compare it to the original right off the bat. I like the track either way the kick is nice and powerful and the percussion adds variety to the track. Could use a bit more mixing but its an interesting beat a lot going on so can't really pick out everything unless I listen to it 50 times lol You can build the intro up a bit more or just minus more of the instruments then drop all of them where you got it now.

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Thanks for the feedback. I think sample is kool and the way u put some effects on it makes its sound really unique. I don't really diggin with that some fx u put on it, I would put more strong kick sound or maybe it just a mixing problem. It would be better if I could hear the drum sounds louder than other elements. Good work man.
 
Really like that underlying melody and the instrument you have with it, but I'd like to have it come in a lot clearer and just thump my headphones off my head when that beat drops. This is def a hard beat that is screamin for a crew to wildout on it. Really like it, but I just can't get past the fact that the clearness of that looped melody is not chrystal clear and stereo'd out in my headphones - that would make this THE hardest beat I've heard on this site!

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All the elements of the instrumental are tight. Structure is good too. The only thing I would suggest is working taking some of the judd out of the track (unless you were going for it) There is So much going on in the low end that the drum line doesn't breath and bounce. If you want to get an emcee on it your going to want to work on that so the vocals with mix. I like it though for sure, keep doing your thing fam.

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I like it! I'd play around with the EQ of the sample so it sounds a bit more flat with the track. Also that little continuous percussive sound just sticks out so much. I'd pan and turn that down volume wise.
 
Your track is actually really sick already - so I'm not sure exactly what type of synth line you would want to put in! If I HAD to give an idea for a synth line, it would be some kind of trappy little stab for a melody and extra rhythm, but without adding several layers of synths you don't want it to sound too out of place.

Honestly the mix is really well done, great low end, good hip hop vibe with appropriate grime, and it hits hard!

Overall great work – keep it up my friend!

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i think that predator sound that kicks in every few bars could be turned down a bit...maybe work on eqing the overall mix...sample is dope, i like the drums, but maybe bring ur kicks a bit more...and have a bit more reverb on snares...my opinion, but sound wise....i think u have it pretty much set...keep at it man...check my track out

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