Need feedback on this beat (F4F)

[charlie morgan]

Here's a snippet of my new beat.
https://soundcloud.com/missez/rap-beat-snippet-prod-charlyy-morgan
If you have any advice/ feedback/ criticism let me know.

( poor mastering as at the moment I only have laptop speakers)

 

[alienaircraftmusic]

link isnt working ..hit me up when u fix it bud
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...h-etc/new-mix-feelin-lonely-ghost-f4f-489545/