Laid Back Sample Beat F4F

[Wishart Beats]

Hit me with some feedback about this beat and I'll return the favor: https://soundcloud.com/wishart-beats/laid-back-hip-hop-beat

I've been making beats for about 8 months now and I'm 15 years old, if that means anything.
I'm looking for criticism on every aspect of the beat, so give me things that I can improve on.

Anyways, have a nice day and don't smoke crack.

(also here's the youtube video if you want it https://youtu.be/i06xgM-lbOE)

 

[C Boy MusiCC]

Dope I like the sample

 

[SwagProductionz]

i like the sample choice / chopping but i honestly feel the drums coulda matched the beat better.. but besides that good stuff But anyway come check out my new wiz khalifa type beat > https://www.futureproducers.com/for...t-his-album-but-ne-way-drop-links-f4f-481596/. i've produced for soulja boy/ honey cocaine/ lil b among others and be sure to follow me on twitter https://www.twitter.com/SlurRty

 

[hrpilm]

The sample chops are nice here, has a little J. Dilla over it, however the beat is just a tad to long for me at 3 minutes, gets a little repetetive, cut it down to 1-2 minutes, when it is just the beat. Just a little thing though. As far as the drums, I want a little more power behind the, perhaps some layering would do the trick. Otherwise the mix sounds clean and well made to me. Definitely keep up what you are doing though, you got talent.

F4F: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...phone-piano-boom-bap-instrumental-f4f-481853/

 

[Wishart Beats]

yo thanks for the feedback! i really appreciate it

 

[Eightpool]

good melody...needed to be variated a bit...because a beat longer than 2 minutes which has the same pattern becomes boring...i suggest to make complex melodies using a lot of chops. Same for drums try to make different patterns adding percussions like crashes,open hats,tambourines,woodblock etc...props man

check me out at:
https://soundcloud.com/eightpoolofficial

 

[DAHTrump]

interesting sample choice. I personally enjoyed it. I agree with eight pool when he said you could add more drum elements. but overall, it is still enjoyable. Nice track.

Can you let me know what you think of this?
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...guranteed-drop-links-so-i-can-comment-481128/

 

[NodTheProducer]

I really like this beat. The sample is good I like the chops and the girl singing makes the beat to me.Yes you could've done more with the drums though.
Check out my beat thanks

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-dope-boombap-sample-instrumental-f4f-481966/

 

[Wishart Beats]

thanks to everyone who commented... i checked out all your stuff

 

[BL3]

- I like sample chop
- When the main drums come in -- it has a nice bounce
- Though i feel the mix of the overall track could be better (not sure how though to be honest)
- I agree with adding more drum elements -- it'll help keep the beat interesting and vibrant

Please return the favour:

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...nny-liang-remix-all-feedback-returned-481950/

Thanks!

 

[namesi]

Nice sample chops. I like the drum choices too. That snare is so nice. I would just add a little more variation throughout to keep things interesting. Nice work though.

Here is my latest. Check it out if you'd like: Beautifully Chilled Sampled Beat (Feed For Feed)

 

[Wishart Beats]

Thanks for the feedback! Its means a lot to me.

 

[Haze91]

dope beat fam
just needs some more variation w the snares imo, maybe the chops too at some parts.. or play around w a filter
nothing too drastic tbh, it's simple and sounds good as it is
good work

check me out @ https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ap-dirty-south-etc/new-chill-beat-f4f-482049/

 

[Ajani Nanabuluku]

Honestly, there aint nothing I see that can add to it. Other than just shorten it, this is a very well made piece from the drums to the sample. That sample is so ****ing catchy. Good work man!

Check this out:

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...fferings-vol-2-*will-return-feedback*-482035/

 

[datfootdive]

Nice beat man. Especially for only being 15. The sample choice was on point and I like the drum choice a lot. Keep it up man

 

[Wishart Beats]

yo thanks for the feedback!

 

[CheckYourHead2727]

First off +1 for Dr. Steven Brule!

Maybe go back to your sample and find some chops for change ups. Kick needs a little more mid and top end sample is covering it up or maybe sample track needs turned down and drums up a lil. I dunno.

Good work though i was noddin.

Keep On.

 

[Wishart Beats]

First off +1 for Dr. Steven Brule!

Maybe go back to your sample and find some chops for change ups. Kick needs a little more mid and top end sample is covering it up or maybe sample track needs turned down and drums up a lil. I dunno.

Good work though i was noddin.

Keep On.

thanks for the detailed mix feedback, its the kinda thing i need advice on the most.

 

[micasaweapon]

Sounds great! Excellent for 8 months. You are definitely headed in the right direction. I'm gonna agree with the rest of these guys on the repetitiveness. Try adding a breakdown towards the end. That is something rappers we be looking for.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...rty-south-etc/new-summer-song-t-h-o-t-481960/

 

[ThreadyBeats]

Keep it up, Your ear is developing. By that I mean the samples are decent and your editing is developing. I think it kind of needs a little structure. Structure will prevent it from being long and boring. For instance before a chorus you could add a 4 bar break/bridge where you change the beat or add a filter to make the listener anticipate the chorus.

Feedback appreciate here:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-south-etc/**threaybeats-ethics**-f4f-482206/