Huge Futuristic Experimental Hip Hop -F4F Guranteed (Drop Links So I Can Comment)

DAHTrump

DAHTrump

DAH Trump


Take a listen to this and let me know your thoughts! CONSTRUCTIVE Criticism is welcomed! The more detailed the better.

Drop links so I can comment back on your music! ;)


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Keep it 100.
 
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DAHTrump said:


Take a listen to this and let me know your thoughts! CONSTRUCTIVE Criticism is welcomed! The more detailed the better.

Drop links so I can comment back on your music! ;)

Keep it 100.
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Those strings... Oh those beautiful strings.

Solid track.


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WOW, this instrumental is on some other shit bro. I can see someone like J. Cole on this. I love the progressiveness of this track, especially the part after the chorus; love the way it builds and the cinematic theme. The mix is on point too; keep up the work man, you got skills.
 
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Damn this is on another level, good job man. Don't really have any criticisms, just keep it up
 
BRUUUUUU!! I freaking love this beat man solid all the way round. I love instrumentals that take me on a journey nice man!!
 
Thanks for your comments guys! Keep dropping more comments and don't forget your links so I can reply back!

Comment on my SoundCloud and I'll comment back on yours!
 
Very interesting sound, everything fits great, drums are powerful and the mixing is nice too.

All the structure, the variations are really well made.

Good job !
 
Thanks for the feed on my track, I really like the drums/ 808 when they come in. The cymbals/hats sound a little washy and not so detailed to me but thats probably just the shitty soundcloud converters. like the layering of the kick with that distorted kick in the middle/end part, really adds to the punch. Wish i could hear this as a .wav file id probably be much more usful critiquing the mix if i could hear more detail haha. But nice work over all! could definitely hear rapping over this.
 
Great piano keys in the beginning, but not really sure about the strings. Great mixing and the drums sound good. Like the fireworks effects with the vocal samples especially after 4th of July. Chord progressions are great are so is the progression of the song when you bring in the piano and strings to flesh out the verse. Transition to chorus and chorus are nice - like how you add in the additional synth panning around to create that section. Choral and sounds are so lovely in the chorus and nice use of glitches.

I could critique this whole joint section to section, but it's clear you understand song structure and creation so I won't get into all of that. I would like to hear some variation in your chord progression since it repeats throughout the whole song. Maybe add in a bridge with some variations - since the song is in the key of A I was thinking a bridge that goes D - E - A - F# (a bar apiece) and then D - E - A (2 bars) just to add some extra sexiness and variety.

Overall, a really solid track and you already got my respect on Soundcloud...def looking forward to your future drops
 
Dont know if you fix the mix from the link you send in my thread but sound way better now , mix seem way more clear . Like i told you in my thread the composition is crazy you did something amazing fam . Keep up that good work !
 
Damn dude, that was legit one of the best thing I've heard in a while. Love the strings, they compliment the whole song so well.
 
Great track! Loving the piano chords and strings!

I also really like the hint of distortion on your kicks. It adds a nice raw touch to your beat. Dope track, keep droppin' them!
 
wildinout8 said:
Great piano keys in the beginning, but not really sure about the strings. Great mixing and the drums sound good. Like the fireworks effects with the vocal samples especially after 4th of July. Chord progressions are great are so is the progression of the song when you bring in the piano and strings to flesh out the verse. Transition to chorus and chorus are nice - like how you add in the additional synth panning around to create that section. Choral and sounds are so lovely in the chorus and nice use of glitches.

I could critique this whole joint section to section, but it's clear you understand song structure and creation so I won't get into all of that. I would like to hear some variation in your chord progression since it repeats throughout the whole song. Maybe add in a bridge with some variations - since the song is in the key of A I was thinking a bridge that goes D - E - A - F# (a bar apiece) and then D - E - A (2 bars) just to add some extra sexiness and variety.

Overall, a really solid track and you already got my respect on Soundcloud...def looking forward to your future drops
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I really liked the advice you gave here. Really inspiring post that will help me think out of the box for the next one and I thank you BIG TIME for it
 
Thanks for the comments on my post guys! You have a way with words! I left feedback to all of you who dropped links!

Let's keep these comments coming! Drop your links so I can comment back!

COMMENT ON SOUNDCLOUD AND I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR!

Keep it 100
 
Now this is a dope beat! Great work on this.Loving all the instruments put together in this too.Sounds like a problem or drake type track.
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Very dope. Right from the start. Love the melodies. Keys are on point and I love all the little "sprinkles" you add in there to spice it up. Keep bringin stuff like this for sure! Followed you on SC.
 
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