Grimey Hip Hop - ALL FEED RETURNED

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I did the rap, the beat, and the mix so please critique everything.

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Wow man - right from the start with that sample the track had a great vibe. Great work with the pitching of the vocals, it was a great fit with this genre.

Good flow when the beat dropped in - although I found the little gap between the hook and the main verse a bit surprising; seemed like it lost a bit of energy there.

The mix sounds good overall, although I have two thoughts. 1) I think there could be more low frequencies throughout. The kick has great weight and low end but a bass line would do well to compliment it. 2) The voice sounds very cleanly recorded which is good but some saturation and compression with a LA-2A emulator will help to give it that hip hop grime.

Other than those thoughts the track bangs! These are just my opinions though.

Overall great work – keep it up my friend!

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Beat is hard. I'd like to hear more thump from the kick and snare, but daym I'm feeling what you did with this track. That flow is on point too and like how the chorus works with your flow. I was just gonna say I wanna hear a variation in the beat, but then you bring in that bell section and everything is on point. Great flow in the third verse too. My only real critique is to just get the beat knockin a little harder.

Check me out at: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ack/poseidon-timbaland-style-beat-f4f-479751/
 
Not my style bro but the abstract sound does justice and your flows very oxymoron lol some Tyler the creator type ish nice nice keep it up!

Check out my latest track below check the last page for the updated track
 
Beat: I like it, it's cool and has a horrorcore feel you don't get a lot in hip hop these days. I would just say it needs some more variety to keep it interesting.

Rap: Pretty good. The flow is good, voice is decent, and you have pretty good presense but it feels like a bit of a Sparkmaster Tape or a Lil Ugly Mane copy, but that's just my opinion

Mix: Seems spot on to me. Maybe raise the bass a bit?

My latest:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...per-smooth-beat-vectrino-480200/#post49811433

Another recent one:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-feedback/f4f-new-smooth-sampled-beat-480088/
 
thats a really nice track, i would bump it for sure. i would add you on soundcloud but i already did about 6 months ago lol. good work
 
Such a dope mix. The grime feel is excellent, right from the beginning. I think the bells at the end kind of took away from that feeling a little so maybe a different instrument would fit better. (vibes maybe)

Vox are pretty much perfect imo. The deep voice fits well with the grimy vibe you have going.

Link for feed: futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/rap-chill-rap-boom-bap-trap-dirty-south-etc/99-problems-remix-480349/#post49812144
 
Lito313 said:
thats a really nice track, i would bump it for sure. i would add you on soundcloud but i already did about 6 months ago lol. good work
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haha thanks my man, glad you still support it. Thanks for the feed everyone, returning now!
 
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