Nice like the build up. Would be nice theatrical intro for the drop into something epic. Great for a movie or something along those lines.
I had my cinematic phase about a year ago. Its fun to score, though there really isn't a big market for it on soundclick.
No to say that there isn't a big market for shopping theatrical scores to movies, commercials, etc. just I know you/I are mainly making soundclick shit.
Keep it up I'm liking what I'm hearing. No real flaws in the mix though having some more complete would be cool.