Dredge - "UP All NIght Long" F4F 100

I like the idea of the song. The timbre of your voice is different which is good. Lyrics are sweet. However, I would really work on your timing. Just to put it in perspective. If you take am acapella of (insert favorite rapper here) and put over a beat off time it will suck. Timing is more important than lyrics and your lyrics are good. So, your lyrics + on time delivery = DOPE!

If you cannot stay on time, thin out your verse and eliminate some words from your verse. Hope this helps. Keep it up.
 
@ uncle dutch thx fir the feed. Actually the off time is done intentionally.. I wanted a diff flow than the standard boom bap flow... I liiike it but to each his own
 
This is super interesting. I really feel like this has potential. I have to agree with Papa Joe and Uncle Dutch though. The beat is really ****in' nice. If you cleaned up the vocals near the beginning this would work better in my opinion. Nice and original though! Keep it up!
 
interesting choice of beats. i think the vocals aren't clear b/c of the mic and audio interface. what type of mic and audio interface are you using?

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https://www.futureproducers.com/for...l-gain-16k-plays-like-my-other-beat-485106/2/

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vato22 said:
Sup Fp got another orginal track off my upcoming album...I got the lyrics included under the track info on the sound cloud page, if you want to follow along ..check it and tell me what you think...all feed will be returned

https://soundcloud.com/mr-maximus/uup-aall-night-loooong-6
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In my opinion, the rapper's flow is slightly alright because it sounds slightly off beat and/or choppy in some occasions.
The beat is something that I wouldn't usually listen to, though it is interesting.
What I would suggest is to work a bit more on the sounds the producer chooses for each instrument. Also, you could try re-recording the HOOK, so it sounds a bit more melodious or less off key.

I hope it helped in some way.

YOUR feedback is appreciated :-)
http://bit.ly/1tDhB0t
 
You are on to something, this is very different. Delivery needs some work which I can understand with the rapid fire type of flow you are using. Barely enough time to come up for air. I love because you are being yourself and stepping outside the box. Keep it up buddy. Once you get your delivery and cinematics down your game will elevate.
 
@prps i actually have a decent mic and interface.. I have this new tube amplifiet modeled after the r2-a its pretty slick.. Im still learning it
 
Sounding good bro! This is really original and cool. The beat has a great vibe and the vox has a lot of character that really stands apart from others. I agree that with a bit of practice you can probably tighten a bit of the delivery, but that would come together pretty quick.

Really great work, I can't wait to hear more! Keep it up!


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Cheers!
 
Thanks for the feed. Vibey beat. I think the vocal mix is a little weak that's why it's hard to understand what you're saying at some points. Might wanna boost the high end to make it more understandable. You've got some good lyrics. Flow sounds a little bit off at certain points, but it's on rhythm for the most part. Nice work on this, keep it up!
 
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