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[Menezing]

Check out my new song. This is my first post and I need some constructive criticism. I need to know what am I missing or what is wrong with it. Constructive criticism will help me to improve and step up my game.Let me know what you think about this song.

https://soundcloud.com/menezing/menezing

Thanks!

Menezing

 

[blackroyalty]

Check out my new song. This is my first post and I need some constructive criticism. I need to know what am I missing or what is wrong with it. Constructive criticism will help me to improve and step up my game.Let me know what you think about this song.

https://soundcloud.com/menezing/menezing

Thanks!

Menezing

The beat is intriguing with the piano and synths, though it's not the style I'm usually into. In my opinion, you have a great voice that could be improved to have a better flow.

The hook is interesting.

**Return the favor by dropping a review on my song?**
https://soundcloud.com/michaeljoelmu...ting-like-demo

 

[Donta Black]

Keep it up bro, just sounds like your reading it off the paper, once you become comfortable with your lyrics and memorize them you can work on constructing your character over the mic. Check me out: www.futureproducers.com/forums/prod...official-video-100%-feedback-returned-473571/