Obituary feat. SubFreq

[rafztar]

Had really good feedback from people that heard it so far, but theyre people i know and that have helped with the song.

Want some real feedback..

This song was conceived 'in the moment' after hearing the vocals by subfreq, i knew exactly what sound i wanted and thinks this works really well.

For me this is experimental hip hop style as i never go without a hook or chorus but have done this time, its vocals all the way.

Hope you like it and can leave some comments. Dont forget to fan my profile if you like it
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[BassCrack]

So i'm not sure if you're the one rapping or not, but whoever is really off beat. Notice how when the beat drops, it doesn't feel right? It seems like the rapper wrote this for another song or something. The beat is cool, (i'm assuming this is you) but I would suggest the emcee to memorize their lyrics properly and develop their flow a lot more.

Also the drums are really underpowered on this.