Whats up everyone check out my first track. Please leave feedback and I will return all feedback quickly
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Whats up everyone check out my first track. Please leave feedback and I will return all feedback quickly
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http://www.futureproducers.com/forum...d.php?t=245706 - First Track
http://www.futureproducers.com/forum...d.php?t=246523 - Second Track
sounds pretty good man...thanx for your feed back
cool beat... its gotta nice melody, lots of variations as well, overall good work,,.. it kind of grows on you, i had to listen to it twice lol
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hot frrruckin beat!!!!!
hot beat, the intro and everything goes well with the drop. unique style. this is something that i could see snoop droppin on his latest album. feeling that bridge. thanks for hitting me up.
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No problem and thank you for the feedbackOriginally Posted by Charvey
Thanks for the feedback homieOriginally Posted by Jramos
WOW thats a bold statement my man, and I am greatful for it...ThanksOriginally Posted by SmoothBeatz
Last edited by jchords; 04-15-2008 at 05:04 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
http://www.futureproducers.com/forum...d.php?t=245706 - First Track
http://www.futureproducers.com/forum...d.php?t=246523 - Second Track
thanks for the feed. first off, i liked the intro best...this track really shows character...lots of switchups doesn't make it boring. mix and drum choice are also good...keep at it . peace
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"If the the drums hit too hard it will take the mellowness vibe [out of] the whole track and make it stupid sounding. I know that may not make a lot of sense to today's producers aka fans with clout, but louder and harder isn't always the way to go." -Marol
Im feeling it man! Sounds like a familiar sample snippet is placed on each snare hit. The chord progression is cool, I like the drums, the synth is really nice and I like the change ups. Good work fambam!
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Juan"THUNDERTRAX"Luxo
really hot track, like everyone was sayin love the change ups. Only thing that bugged me a little was the hi hat.. it just sticks out, sounds like its kinda dragging a little when it first comes in. but other than that an awesome track!
One of my best beats yet
I like it, Keith Sweat eat your heart.......
80s baby in the house...
PEACE
Thanks for the feedback homesOriginally Posted by dkelloway
Thanks man...Originally Posted by Lux
Hey homie thanks for the feedback...do you have any suggestions on how I could fix thatissue with the hihatOriginally Posted by Long
LOL - 1982 all day homieOriginally Posted by Marol
Last edited by jchords; 04-15-2008 at 06:29 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
http://www.futureproducers.com/forum...d.php?t=245706 - First Track
http://www.futureproducers.com/forum...d.php?t=246523 - Second Track
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