New Beat Im Working On (Feedback 4 Feedback)

[MarioDaKid]

http://soundcloud.com/mariodakid/all-over-again-unfinished

Let me know what you think. And please give your most honest opinion, thanks


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[pgathriller]

Wasn't really feeling it

That brass sounds way too synthetic -- try layer it up or something, it sounds like some 80s synth brass

The drums are also really sharp and the mix just feels too empty -- the kicks need to knock way harder and there's no bass which is key to gluing together a mix. the drums also sit too high above the body of the beat and feel too separate

btw, get rid of that crash and fast! it's horrendous

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Sample + Flip -- That old school Wu-Tang style type beat (Japanese sample)

[MarioDaKid]

Wasn't really feeling it

That brass sounds way too synthetic -- try layer it up or something, it sounds like some 80s synth brass

The drums are also really sharp and the mix just feels too empty -- the kicks need to knock way harder and there's no bass which is key to gluing together a mix. the drums also sit too high above the body of the beat and feel too separate

btw, get rid of that crash and fast! it's horrendous

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http://www.futureproducers.com/forum...sample-408446/

LOL. Wasn't really expecting that, but thanks anyways.

[dMillionaire_Real]

hey man yeah im not diggin the the brass get a more realist sounding one and layer itll be dope keep at it tho bruh!

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[Enigma(EndofDaze)]

I gotta agree on the brass sounding too "fake" Otherwise I think overall its a very good production! Keep at it my man!

[puncho]

sounds to cluttered or sounds arent mixed decently just change them brass other then that good shit check this out SuperStar Track @WhosePuncho F4F

[Buzzzzzzzzz]

if you use more of the stereo image youre mix would sound a lot better... all your sounds are lifeless

http://soundcloud.com/buzzzbeats/dia

[GueVaraBeats]

definitely a good idea to begin with. I think if you switched up that brass for something a little more interesting it would definitely amp the song up a little bit. Throw in some bass in there, this could be a solid track

[Sabelo93]

ye man change the brass and add a bass. the drums are nice but need to bang more. you did a nice work with the stereo in my opinion . Maybe add a melody cuz the brass should be in the background with a bass and then a melody in front of that know what I mean?

[DaSupplier]

Agree with everyone saying about the brass and add some percussion. Everything else is ok. Maybe work on getting your mix together. Otherwise solid work bro.

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