New beat (feedback..lol returned)

[sir sikk]

sup guys im blazed..new beat up on my soundclick page..links in the sig..called rapid fire..check out the othrs if ud like..
lemme kno wt u u guys think.. I went for a diff..more uptempo sampled vibe..feedbakk returned..

[dkelloway]

yo, what's good? Thanks for the feedback...
This is definitely different. I was feeling the intro chops, but I think the pitch of the sample is a bit too high. I think that the bass could be a bit higher or thicker. Try using a high-pass filter on the sample, and then adding your own bassline. That could be dope. Once you do that, work on the panning a bit. Then you can consider adding a few more instruments to beef up the track. The drums were nice though. good stuff, thanks for the feedback

[sir sikk]

yo, what's good? Thanks for the feedback...
This is definitely different. I was feeling the intro chops, but I think the pitch of the sample is a bit too high. I think that the bass could be a bit higher or thicker. Try using a high-pass filter on the sample, and then adding your own bassline. That could be dope. Once you do that, work on the panning a bit. Then you can consider adding a few more instruments to beef up the track. The drums were nice though. good stuff, thanks for the feedback

yea i was thinkin about pitchin the sample downn..good looks on the feed man.