Neen Some Feedback on some RATCHET music. FEED RETURNED 100%.

**itzdlo** · 05-30-2012

I live around LA & Im workin on some tracks for Relly Nation & Joe Moses. I want to know what you think of the mix. Im sure they will have an engineer to master the song more once they spit over it, I wanna know what everyone's opinions are before I make the final touches. PLEASE DONT HOLD BACK!! Thanks FP. Drop your links Ill get back to you by the end of the night.

Track 1 - Club_working by theekidfresco on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
Track 2 - Beat 2 by theekidfresco on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

**IHIambo** · 05-30-2012

Track 1 : I love the phaser on the hihat, Kick and 808s clash a little bit, Cut some of the lows on the Kick but not to much to keep the texture of the kick.

Track 2 : This shit is tuff! I like what you did hear, I would personally bring the organ your using up an octave to fill up the highs cause it sounds a little muddy, but its up to you. Good work.

**Vee.Ey.Dala** · 05-30-2012

Track 1: Love this banger, I found myself freestyling over it lol. The bassline and the melody is on point. Am not really fond of the kicks though. Other than that, I can see even the likes of Weezy killing this beat.

Track 2: The bassline here is sick, but in my opinion I think it should be a bit lower. Otherwise the rest of the beat is dope.

**dylan_wtf** · 05-30-2012

i love the drums on the first one, the tweeting percussion might have been a little loud idk but overall solid track

the second one sounds a little heavy on the low end, bring out the highs more but other than that its straight

Here's the soundtrack to your summer *feedback 4 feedback

**jrbeats5** · 05-30-2012

only peeped the 1st 1 but its hot its got the potential to be a major hit if given to the right artist its got that tyga feel like rack city ***** rack rack city ***** hahah keep up the nice work

**dMillionaire_Real** · 05-30-2012

eh bro! whats up thanks for the feed yo, why is everything on soundcloud whered ur sc page go? i thnk i was lookin for it the other day and couldnt find it

but listening to this club one its dope af that kick/808 goes ham

2nd ones reallll gangst that chop is dirty af thooo, o **** that 808 is stupid hard too lol damn!

**WoodshelM** · 05-30-2012

Beat 1: I think the track is cool, but the bass wasn't slapping like Beat 2. I think you should revisit you bass/sub.

Beat 2: Track was rocking. I have no issues with that... I Like you style kid...

**Bucky TNP** · 05-30-2012

1- A good track, but maybe a little too many 808s around 1:00 really cool though, it begs for vocals, and the track would really come to life with a good rapper
2- *gets my other subwoofer out* ...NICE. I really like the pitchbend on the 808, it really helps it stand out from most trap drumlines. Again, this would sound so much better with a good rapper, go find one!

Im a beginner, so feedback will really help
And...Here comes another track! WILL RETURN ALL FEEDBACK

**itzdlo** · 05-30-2012

Thanks for the feed everyone. I appreciate it. Sounds like I need to emss around with the low ends on both of these a little bit! Haha. Just returned the feed to everyone.