My First Hip Hop Video, Feedback Appreciated!!!

[Mako]

Hey FP! I just wanted to get some feedback on our first video that we did a couple days ago. Here is the link.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9LLvnuTf8CM

The song is actually called "Happy" but this is the remix version featuring the other members in my group. It's the first single to my album "Fallen Angel" that will be coming out later this year. I'm really excited and we had a lot of fun making it. All feedback is appreciated and don't forget to leave your links so i can return the favor. I hope you enjoy!

Mako

 

[istoleyourmomsTV]

Alright, I thought it was cool for just like you and your friends.

My advice would be to have 3-4 other scenes that alternate around during each section of a verse. Each glimpse lasting 5-10 seconds on average. This would keep the viewer from getting bored.