Just a snippet, what you think

[jmbriley]

Just a snippet. I made the beat and recorded the vocals. Not really the mixing but just in general what do you think.

[BigMitch05]

it was a nice concept to the song....i liked what u did with that...but i think the beat could use some work.....i think the melody could use some work..add some more elements....but besides that it was cool...i would like to hear it after the mix.....make sure u check me out....**Brand New**Fresh Out the Oven**ThoroBeatZ Productions