Jazzy Hip Hop Beat (Any Feedback Appreciated)

[YWM]

Hey guys,

Im new to this forum so nice to meet you guys. Im new to beatmaking and i really enjoy doing it but i dont have many friends who do the same. So, I've decided to create my own youtube page to post up my beats. So far ive only posted one of my beats so i would really appreciate it if you guys could give any feedback that i can use to improve my beats in the future. I will def post up some more in the future!

Here are the links:

Joey Bada$$ Type Beat- Unwind (Prod.YWM) - YouTube

https://soundcloud.com/ywmbeats

Thanks guys

 

[pumppuhaulikkomies]

hi! i listened the beat! i can honestly say i like it! def needs an emcee tho. theres plenty of room for rapping, which is good! and the hook part is dope!

return feed here if you have time https://www.futureproducers.com/for...t-we-did-featuring-braille-wordsworth-469306/

 

[Dak Reynold]

Bmbz for a great beat. The only thing I didn't like about it was that cow bell type of sound around 1.24 and it kicks in again towards the end if that sound was replaced it would be just right. Sorry I don't what to be banded for using proper English.
Sht nuk dat beet hitz hrd. I'z flo al ovr dat sht. pece.

 

[G-Town Beats]

Really nice beat! I think the bass is a bit to loud but anyway good stuff.
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[mmc7]

nice intro! imo bass is a bit loud. Anyway nice beat, 2:31 and after is great,

 

[YWM]

thanks for the feedback guys. do u mean the sub bass or the bass drum?

 

[FNYK]

The keys are really excellent.

The snare snaps a little too much to the fore - think the Rhodes is strong enough for the beat to simply underpin it rather than drown it, but all in all very impressive start.

 

[YWM]

yep have to work on compressing the drums so that it doesn't overwhelm the other frequencies/instruments. thanks for the feedback!

 

[vato22]

sup man appreciate the feed...ya just work on the drums a bit...the build up to the chorus is very nice...good start to your beat making..keep it up!

 

[l1l]

This is really good but imo it would even be better with added effects like wind chimes rain or scratches or even a vocal sample just to give it more scenery ^.^

 

[dedication]

Dope beat man. Nice start for a beginner. A vocal sample and some small effects will bring this beat more to life like l1l said. Keep it up!

 

[Maduse]

Chill, love the sample.
Keep it up this is dope.

 

[YWM]

thanks man, appreciate it . didnt use any samples for this. made this from scratch

 

[JJMarfisi]

Was the rhodes a sample or did you play it? I like it.
My favorite part is at 1:16.
This beat is mixed very well and I don't see any cons in my opinion.

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[YWM]

yeah i played the keys myself. took me ages to learn the chords! haha
i took the progression idea from him: Neo Soul R&B Chords in key F - YouTube

 

[Menthol Slim]

some of those higher end instruments need soft cuts in the low end and more reverb, and those mid range percs feel abit too loud, abit off putting still smooth as ****.

 

[YWM]

thanks for the feedback man. yeah will try adjusting the eq's and see how it sounds

 

[scifer]

funky, i like it. great percussion. I would add in some vocal samples to contribute melody. Great work, keep it up!

 

[VicStylez]

sounds dope i think it needs a little bit better mix otherwise good job

 

[Stranac]

very nice, easy laid back style. maybe you could add another instrument after 8 bars but its cool. keep it up