Jay Dilemma - Hurt Your Soul

[IronMonkee]

Sup Folks....

Thought i'd up a track I've been working on.. Still needs to be mixed down a lil more, but getting there.. Was a hard track to write, asmost of us dont like to show or acknowledge our flaws... both production and vocals by yours truely.. anyhow, let me know what ya'll think..

Jay

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...songID=7868077

[Isk2009]

U need to edit tha link address. But anyway, That **** is hot. I would change the way you say tha hook. I would bring the "your" a lil closer to the "soul" To make it flow a lil bit better imo. You could also make some of tha verse lyrics a lil less choppy, but it aint nuttin too bad. Not much else to complain about. Like you said mix it down a lil more and you'll be all good imo. Good Sh!t. I wouldn't mind playin this on my Ipod actually.

[IronMonkee]

thank u sir.. agreed with some of the choppyness in parts of the verse.. some of that is due to the way i write lyrics at the moment.. i record as i write.. so some lines dont match up untill i re-record... thanx

Jay

[sir sikk]

yoo listenin nw..dope sample..jus dropped dammnnn bruddah..jus work on tht vocal quality..dope ass beat man..good work.
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[IronMonkee]

thanx dude... yeah, building a booth in the next few weeks... should improve recording alot... got a good soun card and mic, but am recording in an open garage... alot of background noise.. thanx again..

Jay