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    Jay Dilemma - Hurt Your Soul

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    Sup Folks....

    Thought i'd up a track I've been working on.. Still needs to be mixed down a lil more, but getting there.. Was a hard track to write, asmost of us dont like to show or acknowledge our flaws... both production and vocals by yours truely.. anyhow, let me know what ya'll think..

    Jay

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    U need to edit tha link address. But anyway, That **** is hot. I would change the way you say tha hook. I would bring the "your" a lil closer to the "soul" To make it flow a lil bit better imo. You could also make some of tha verse lyrics a lil less choppy, but it aint nuttin too bad. Not much else to complain about. Like you said mix it down a lil more and you'll be all good imo. Good Sh!t. I wouldn't mind playin this on my Ipod actually.

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    thank u sir.. agreed with some of the choppyness in parts of the verse.. some of that is due to the way i write lyrics at the moment.. i record as i write.. so some lines dont match up untill i re-record... thanx

    Jay

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    yoo listenin nw..dope sample..jus dropped dammnnn bruddah..jus work on tht vocal quality..dope ass beat man..good work.
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    thanx dude... yeah, building a booth in the next few weeks... should improve recording alot... got a good soun card and mic, but am recording in an open garage... alot of background noise.. thanx again..

    Jay

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