Indoctrinate Instrumental Feedback please

[Manis Phesto]

Recently got done working on a beat i want to use for my upcoming project. Any feedback would be very much appreciated. Also any tips for getting cleaner mixes would be dope. No samples all keys. Thank you.

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[drage21]

i love that synth sound bro its real nice, i dunno what it is but its awesome, and the other sounds coming in all sound good, i dunno instrument names if they are insturments just know it sound hot bro, the drums are real nice too, i like the shakers fit really well good work

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[JawadShabani]

I like the beat, but the mix needs some work. The pads/synths need a little EQing because they are interfering with the master. The bass is overpowering the kick drum. Cut some of the low ends of that bass and separate the frequencies of the two; that would do the job. Also, try changing up the drum pattern here and there to give it a little twist. Just telling you my honest opinion. You're on the right track though!

[Ace2CWB]

Hm, melody wise, everything is there. I like the pattern, it's a nice little thing you got going on man. Real different man, i like it, chill. But yeah, the mix can use some work, pretty much everything addressed is how i feel too. Keep it up man!

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[FCNYJordan]

Really Liked The Drumwork & The Keys, Good Beat, & Props On The Black Beavis & Butthead Icon Shits Dope, Leave FB Bro JordanFCNY - Every Picture (NEW BEAT)