I feel like my mix needs some help. IM GOING CRAZY!!! PLZ HELP!!

[JMFLYproductions]

Just listen and plese give me some pointers. I think this beat has a lot of potential, what can I do to make it better?

I know this isnt the place, but if you want me to return a feed i will too, thx!

Stacks next to the choppa by JMFLY

[CoMpLeXx]

where's the sub? i think a tune like that needs some low sub to make it BANG!

[effusiveart]

oh yeah they need work.
having a hard time to even think what you need to do.
when you mix tracks are you listening to to speakers or headphones

[BeatGenerals]

Bass isnt there really, you have your hi hat louder than your kicks which is never good. Work on figuring whats important in the track and focus on bringing those elements to the front.

[thermionic304]

This isn't that bad at all. Just some compression, volume and EQ adjustments.

Definitely lacking in the low end. Sounds like you cut too much high end off the synth in the intro as well.

If you want to send me the files, I can try doing a mix and master for you. Just PM me.

If you want to leave some feedback, do so here:
Dr. Dre "Detox" Style Beat (Feed For Feed)

Overall, nice job!

[AddictiveBeats]

In my opinion the problem is the sample you used for your kick, it's too low and you managed to take out all the bass in your mix..Change that 808 to a real kick, eq it a bit, compress it, and you should be good with the drum. Another problem is that the synth effect is too loud compared to your lead, so try turning it down a bit.
The only thing i can tell you is to learn your monitors..listen to your music on your monitors and then go listen to it in your car, you'll then have a reference of how your beat really sounds. I don't know if that clear or not, but if you need any more help send me a mesage!

[HayMaka]

Sounds like the hats are too loud. I agree with everyone else, the bass needs to punch through the track.