HELP!! Beat inside

[funkin]

Having a few problems with this beat but its my second ever, i'm using reason this time round. What do you think?

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[noblewordz]

1st thing I thought was you need better drums. Reason comes with some good kits, use them. You are missing a baseline. Melody ain't bad.

You realize the beat stops about 45sec in and then its silence for 4 minutes?

[funkin]

Thanks for the feedback, i will change those drums today and put in a bassline. I really appreciate your reply

[rando]

I was about to say "you should'nt really post your 2nd beat ever, cause it's not gonna be that good", but........

This beat is good with some re-touching here and there. Also you need to add more instruments/changeups, but good start so far.

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[spacefruit]

needs more but it's great for a second beat. Melody is the best part, but you need more variation throughout the beat. nice work though. keep at it. hit me back when you can. :i: U DON'T KNOW :i:

[Sand]

great for a second beat!

drums need lots of work. Raise the volume, layer the kicks, layer the clap, add some hi-hats to move it around more, look up compression, and you could have yourself a real nice track! the melody is pretty nice, the strings could be more powerful i thought.

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