LOL this beat is just stupid! Sage is moving up at an incredibly fast rate. And the chorus is catchy stuff. I'm really feelin this guys, good work!! The mix isn't perfect, vocals are a little loud but other than that it's cool!
Yo the beat is tight! The first verse was the illest! When I read the lyrics, I was like this sh*t gone be wack, but that sh*t was tight! You need to add somethin to the chorus, like more vocals or something, it sounds like it's missing something...Good sh*t though...Where did yall lay the track at? House? Studio? The song is good, but I think the vocals need to be mixed better with the track...And thanks for reviewing a "Newbie" beat, I'm only three months deep in the game, but I'm a fast ass learner if I must say so myself...
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Prime suspekt what I did was make the beat and let Lu handle the mixing/recording (in studio) and lyrics. Thanks for checking it out!
Last edited by Sage / S.O.Serene; 11-28-2004 at 09:28 AM.
OK, OK, Im gonna give you some love... since you is a fellow jamaican now...lol...alright... first of all.. I dig it.. very nice... belongs on the radio, clubs, etc... its real nice. Catchy too.. I could bump this in the F-150 now!!!!!lol.. The only thing that I wish I could hear more is the drums.. Maybe its because its compressed or whatever, I don't know.. but it sounds weak. I would like to hear that kick, and snare more.. and for the chorus, bring up that "GET UP" sample.. make it stand out more...maybe even dub your voice over the sample.. filter it or something, meaning give it a different texture, then subtly drop it under the "get up", but anyways, thats me... If you're cd out, nothign really can do bout it... it sounds good anyways, I think only producers would tell that s*** anyways, lolol.. Overall.. I feel it, like it, dig it, whatever, lol good work....much succes to you..and your crew, peaceeeeee.
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sup dawg, the beat is tight could be better volume wise on some things, the rapper I feel could do better but he aint bad...peace
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