First Trance Track

[joeybeeside]

Hello all. could some of you please have a listen to the first trance track i have made and give me your honest opinions on it. all feedback be it good or bad will be a big help. obviously the track aint a future hit because ive only been producing trance for about 2 months. the track was made on reason.
The track isnt mastered or anything cause i havent a clue were to start so any tips you guys have would also be a massive help.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/jmbmusic.htm

[Iason]

This is not Trance so far.

Too heavy of a beat. Not enough effects to create a surreal environment.

Need waves of sounds and energy.

It's too empty.

Needs at least a seemingly slow elongated melody.

The melody you have is nothing like trance to me.

So far it's too simple.

Don't give up though.

[Northern_Fist]

You've got the right idea. You just need to explore your own sound more. Your melody needed to progress a little bit more, evolve much more. And yes, you need more effects.