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    luckkyle is offline Registered User
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    First song, some DnB. Would love some feedback! F4F.

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    Hey,

    This is one of my first full songs I managed to finish. First time I've been able to get past making small loops and trying to perfect them.

    Thanks for listening! Follow me on soundcloud if you like what you hear!

    http://soundcloud.com/luckkyle/k-w-l-forest-wip
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    Yo, this is real nice man, proper liquid vibe to it. I'd try and find a good vocal sample just to fill it out nicely and maybe lower the volume of the breakdowns like at 1:50 so it kicks in/drops better through the main parts once it comes back in.

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    @bryce - Hey thanks a lot man! Good idea, I was thinking about finding some vocals but I haven't researched any good websites for them. Do you have any idea where I could get some good, chill vocals?

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    It real nice and mixed pretty good too, non if the sounds clash too much. got like and eerie feel to it at points. Maybe gets a little repetive, you should change up the drums and add more layers of sounds at different parts. Its good and really good effort to say its your first song from sdtart to finish.

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    @mystery - Glad to hear that dude! Thanks so much for the feedback. I haven't really gotten to mixing it yet, but I'm stoked to hear that aspect is heading in the right direction. Checking your stuff out now!

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    Man im a sucker for drum n bass i love this track seriously big up!! lol

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    @DJLumineach - Hey thanks a lot man! Me too, no matter what I listen to I always end up right back at DnB

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    I'm no expert on DnB, but for a genre I'm not to good with, anyone can see this execution is seamless, the spacial awareness is very impressive, kick, hats, snare fills, fused with surgical precision, sub has depth and warmth, backing synth adds mystery and ebbs around nicely, perfect delay on the piano, seagull pan nice touch too, you've won me over, bro. Well done.
    MUSIC IS THE ARITHMETIC OF SOUNDS -​Debussy

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    @Pherm - Wow man, did not expect that. Thanks a lot for the kind words. Its a monkey sample but sounds exactly like a seagull too haha :P. Thanks for taking the time to type something like that, keeps people like me motivated!

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    nice work man this is a chill vibe.

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